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The Picture On Your Wall (a rap of mine to impress sage)  Reply with quote  

my nig nig, represent yo, wha wha, bluckaville addicts blingzzz, rep that shit like a gangsta.

i'm simple, i don't need much, peace and logic
knowledge about sense, food, and a complex object
the smell of the harvest and freshly baked bread
to brake the baked bread with breadrin, digest hatred
dilapidated selves, try to re-discover my hunger
haunted by the ghost of christmas past, mark my blunders
then it thunders and i wonder yet again, coherent irony
and the smile on my lips reads: tell em all goodbye for me
they say an optimist live the longest, well he sure lives the most
put my prints all over history, ya sit back and mark my words
a child laughter echoes inside my decayed skull
6 feet deep asleep, i reminisce vividly the picture on ur wall


i settle for little, manage breathin til the end of the day
a modern time ascetic, simple medic, i nimble away
if i found a geni, i'd deliberately defy reason
wish me two ice creams and then i'd give him his freedom
the first audio doctrin is written in green sound waves
graved in air and the ears of absent-minded
contraceptive clouds cover the thoughts simplicity
this year's vintage boosted my individual liberty
appearences are deceptive, my stubble is light gray
find the beauty in the wind that blows with the night train
patterns formed to be devoured in life's ecstasy in all
i vividly remember the misoury in that picture on ur wall


i'm simple, i don't need much, peace and logic
knowledge about sense, food, and a complex object
reason, air, a bed, maybe a pencil and a pad
i can't stand birds, but i love the life force in plants
life that is so simple, u give it water and it grows
the oak is my rolemodel when i rebel against storms
the sun light is my mistress, tenderly strokin my skin
skim through the beard on my dim chin
i am the letters in ur sentence, the rhyme in ur poem
the smile on ur face when it's silent at home
the color of ur iris, the led in ur pencil
the picture on ur wall, the complexity in simple


Last edited by One on Sun Jul 07, 2002 5:51 pm; edited 1 time in total
Post Sun Jul 07, 2002 5:43 pm
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Sage Francis
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I skimmed through it.

mmm. thanks I guess
Post Sun Jul 07, 2002 5:48 pm
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One



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it's cool. i love u.
Post Sun Jul 07, 2002 5:57 pm
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Swordfishtrombones



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wtf did i just step in? :(
Post Sun Jul 07, 2002 6:09 pm
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Path



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whys this guy not banned from this board.
Post Sun Jul 07, 2002 6:39 pm
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the incredible ticktalk



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i kinda liked it, but i'm a sucker for sentimental drivel.
Post Sun Jul 07, 2002 6:47 pm
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Sage Francis
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I like One. He has something to prove.

I don't bann people unless they continually offer absolutely nothing.
Post Sun Jul 07, 2002 7:40 pm
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one  Reply with quote  

he's a pretty cool niglet once u get to know him
Post Sun Jul 07, 2002 8:42 pm
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Path



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yeah, once you get over the poor grammar and the keystyling, hes great...
Post Sun Jul 07, 2002 10:10 pm
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MAGIstraight



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sage was tellin me I added nothing to the boards once...

you really hammered down on me for that one little thing too man...

I never meant to hurt you
never meant to make you cry

peace.
Post Sun Jul 07, 2002 11:48 pm
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quasifoto



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niglet??? what the hell is that?
Post Mon Jul 08, 2002 1:19 pm
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understood but overlooked



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"I don't bann people unless they continually offer absolutely nothing." - Sage


I find that somewhat humurous and absolutely fit.
Post Tue Jul 09, 2002 12:57 am
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